Date: 2017-04-21 14:24
You are a smarty pants, wish I had thought of that. Being an electronics wizz myself I know what you are on about.
Be brief : Your statement should be between 555 and 655 words. That 8767 s about three minutes when read aloud at your natural pace.
My abilities or 8775 gifts 8776 as my brother would have said made sure of that. As long as I had these powers to look into another person 8767 s emotions and God knows what else, my life would always be this. I would always be running from the people who want my powers for their own.
For example: 8775 She escapes from the opera that night, and she and Daniel break into the dynamite factory. Daniel is caught, but Eleanor manages to save him. When they return to the Spirit-Hunters 8767 lab, they find it was destroyed while they were gone. 8776
She goes onto open her laptop to the document I had anonymously sent her. “Here it is” she says. She slides it over for me to read. “Stephanie, this is crazy! What do we do!” I said, acting scared and confused. There was only one thing to do.
Well once he was done handing them out, he said to
open the pieces of paper that were folded in half. “I’m a carpenter”. Then Jack
said “I’m an electrician. After Jack, Julia was up “I’m a psychologist”. We all
had pretty good jobs. After figuring out that Uriah was a chelist
I’m so confused and have no idea what was happening. Then my palms began to burn again. Not again. I was only awake for a few seconds before the pain passed me out, and I could see Smitty catching me before I fell out of the chair. Before I
went out though, I heard Smitty saying he was going to take me someplace safe.
Loved it! really good job, making the reader want to read more. I like how throughout there was a sense of danger, and the reader could tell that something bad was going to happen. Very enticing
By the way Jackson and Olivia both are vampires, but they 8767 re not like me their families are vampires and we form the lux aeterna of the top ten strongest Volturi are the largest and most powerful coven of vampires. They enforce the laws of the vampire world. The equivalent of royalty in the vampire world, the Volturi consists of 5 core members: Aro, Caius, Marcus, Aro 8767 s wife Sulpicia, and Caius 8767 s wife Athenodora.