Date: 2017-03-15 07:32
Ok so I 8767 ve wrote quite a bit but I 8767 m not gunna write it all here I have like 87 college rule papers front and back that would clearly take forever instead I 8767 m gunna do a small excerpt please tell me what yall think.
The rain began to pour down as if the sky was weeping. He looks out the window as a bright light streaks across the sky, burning so bright u would beleive its a second sun. Curious I got up and ran outside as it fell into the lake. Sprinting to the lake I look and see that the water did not help the light instead it seems to have made it stronger. The whole body of water begins to bubble, steam escapes its surface. Wondering what is down there I jump in.
White boards are very useful when you’re trying to keep organized. Also, technology can help a lot. I find Google Docs really useful, because I can access any file anywhere I happen to be, so I can be working a little if I’m sitting in a waiting area, or sitting in my office. Anywhere with Web access becomes the place I write my next thing.
Hi thanks so much for the 8766 how to. 8767 I am not a writer, by no means, but am having to write a synopsis in order to possibly have a human interest story told.
During that passage, there are actually two massive flashback/memory reveals that give Eleanor all the pieces she needs to solve several mysteries at once. BUT, because I don 8767 t have the space to say all that, I just relay the actions she takes that drive the main plot.
As she turned to walk towards the door, I said “Hey Steff, I have been wanting to do this for quite some time now.” She turned around. I pulled out a 9mm.
What happens that makes the MC think he/she will win? She seems to have the upper hand, but then oh no! The antagonist defeats her and rushes off more powerful than ever before.
So far I have made the white folk victorious and put the black people back into a state of slavery. I have decided to make my protagonist a white man who had sanctioned all the attacks (As he worked for the country 8767 s treasury) during the war but all this time he was torn apart between his morality and pressure of his fellow white colleagues and now he has embarked on the journey of correcting his wrongs.
I shared this with my groups and it was a big encouragement. I run two charitable groups under the auspices of the University of the Third Age (U8A) and international charity that provides on-going learning for free. May I use some of your material with them?
OK. But that is not feedback or a review. If you don 8767 t like it, use some manners or tact, and refrain from the 8766 blow off 8767 remark. Yelling at someone with the exagerated use of the exclamation mark tells us more about you than it does about a sincere effort at writing. Good or bad. They made the effort.