Date: 2017-04-21 18:48
Read the full essay that my students and I wrote for the festivals question below. Can you highlight the features that help this essay to get a band 9?
The best way to answer the question below depends on your own personal experience of traditional and religious festivals in your country.
I believe that the most important reason for people to throw their broken things is the increased complicacy of modern products which is much more complicated than ever. For example, if the major parts of computers stop working, like CPU, hard disk, it would be almost unable to recover them without a IT professional. For those who may try to send their damaged stuffs to the customer service centers for help, they would probably find there is no official center nearby. Even if there was one, it might take a long time for reservation, examining, waiting in queue, to get their possessions fixed. Therefore, the difficulties of preventing consumers from repairing would consequently lead them to purchasing new merchandise.
It all depends on where you are now with English and what you need. It of course makes sense to focus your studies on the English you need most for IELTS and that 8767 s the language you find on my site. But if you take the test and find you are a long way off your target score, then you may need to do more general English work.
Thanks for sharing 🙂 I hope your test went ok 🙂 I 8767 ve just posted some ideas for your writing task 7 topic on a previous comment on this page, so take a look.
Task 7 in the IELTS Academic Writing Test is more important than task 6. You have to write more, it 8767 s a more difficult task and it is worth more to your final band for writing as more weight is given to Task 7 than to Task 6. Practice on IELTS practice tests is important for both tasks.
Your task will be marked in four areas. You will get a mark from 6 to 9 on Task response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Your final band for Task 7 will be effectively an average of the four marks awarded in these areas. Task 7 writing is more important than Task 6 and to calculate the final writing mark, more weight is assigned to the Task 7 mark than to Task 6 8767 s mark. To get a good overall mark though, both tasks have to be well answered so don 8767 t hold back on Task 6 or give yourself too little time to answer it properly.
I meant the first sentence you gave to practice. You answered Ahmad that is not right to use 8775 However 8776 there, and decided to ask if it can be 8775 6st sentence however, 7nd sentence 8776 .
Don 8767 t be irrelevant. Although you can use your imagination to expand on your answer, if any part of your letter is totally unrelated to the question and put in to just put up the word count, then the examiner will not take it into account and deduct it from the word count.
How do you think?
Is it depends on several condition such as task, strength of idea and candidates aim score?