Date: 2017-03-14 17:51
Tonight, the sky was clear, and you could see the stars, shining down from their places in the heavens, like beacons of hope for all humanity.
I didn’t even know so many people knew it was my birthday. I am genuinely surprised. I don’t know why, but it was such a great relief that people actually knew that I was born today. I guess it just makes me feel that there are people that care about me.
What’s more, “project” doesn’t have to mean “novel.” In the official Camp NaNoWriMo FAQ regarding What genres can I write in? Can I write non-fiction or poetry? it says that Camp NaNoWriMo welcomes
“No we shouldn’t,” the man behind him answered. Or was it a woman? Their face was wearing a mask. I shouldn’t be quick to judge, should I? Aside from my flame being pushed forward and I glimpse a blaster behind him. His eyes glanced back to the captor and to me.
I heard a soft knock on the door. I knew it was her. She let herself in and walked up to my desk. “Good morning Mr. Lane. I just wanted to let you know that today is my last day working here, I wish I could say it was a pleasure.” She said.
My mom Sally had worked as a waitress at a local cafe two blocks away from our apartment. She walked home every night at around this time. I don’t remember the last time we had dinner together. She put her keys down, took off her shoes and walked towards the kitchen holding a paper bag. She did this every night and I loved her for it. I was not much of a dessert person, but it made her so happy to bring me a leftover piece of pie from work that I always pretended to like.
Your story has a great start, but may I suggest some grammatical issues? You should combine your first two sentences as follows: 8766 Is it over, 8767 she wondered as she lay motionless on the floor? The words 8766 sun 8767 and 8766 light 8767 should be combined into the single word 8766 sunlight. 8767 The sentence which begins, 8775 The adolescent 8776 is missing a semi-colon. It should read as follows: The adolescent stood feebly on her aching feet her long, black, tousled hair only just touching the ground. I hope these suggestions are as kindly received as they were delivered.
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