Date: 2017-03-18 20:29
As her vision fades out into the abyss, the last thing she sees are these two delicate bare feet, like that on a child, gently stepping out into the puddle of steaming red ooze. A sparkling lavender dress sitting just high enough above the ankles to refrain from becoming tainted with blood.
“Well we better start moving before it gets dark,” Palama said impatiently. Taking the hint Harris took Jeffery’s hand. “Come on son let’s go home.” When Harris and Jeffery were out of earshot Ryan looked at Gregory, “What do you think it is?” “I don’t know for sure,” Gregory responded. “But you have an idea?” Palama said. “It… could be a sorcerer,” Gregory said. “Nonsense they don’t exist anymore,” Palama said. “You didn’t feel what I felt!” Gregory said indigently. “Well whatever it is we’ll find out soon.” Ryan said which cause both Gregory and Palama to fall silent. “Let’s go” Ryan said then walked into the woods.
she has a humanitarian heart and would stop at nothing to see that a beggarly child has the chance to eat. she takes a hawker child from the road to feed and is insulted to mind her buisness as she is ruining the sales of the day. once she was nearly beta up for taking a child from the street but this never discouraged jade. her family did all that was necessary to discourage her but she remained determined to see that less privileged children had the chance. All determinations continued till she came across jane a little child with no where to go.
So I re imagined the outcome of the civil war and reversed the outcome by making the white folk victorious but now I am stuck.
You can reduce the amount of things you have to do by transferring things by hand. If a task isn’t worth the time to rewrite it, it’s probably not important. Spend time with things that are important and be mindful of how you spend your time.
You write better when you know someone will soon be reading what you 8767 ve written. If you write in the dark, no one will know if you aren 8767 t giving your writing everything you have. But when you share your writing , you face the possibility of failure. This will force you to write the best story you possibly can.
Yea.. You said we don 8767 t have to write well. Just write and that 8767 s what I 8767 m going to do Because I don 8767 t write well
If only she did not hear either of my names. If only she had not left her belt on in a way it stuck out a little. I pull out my blaster and shoot it. The image melted away to reveal the one I’m looking for. “I thought you should know that I have no attraction to women. A pretty red face would never have worked.”
You know, I 8767 ve seen it done single-spaced with line breaks between OR double-spaced with indent. I think either way works no one will reject you because of that. I do my short synopses with single-spaced + line breaks, but my longer synopses are double-spaced. Maybe someone else on here will know ?
Here is part of my story , would love to hear your feedback ( ps : just first draft , so be nice ). let me know what you think and if you connect with it